Representing thinking, perceiving, liking and desiring

Students' problems page 6 of  8

Problems with the order of participants

Students sometimes have problems with the order of participants note.gif (933 bytes), especially with verbs associated with likes and dislikes:

You may annoy when you go shopping because the robbers, murderers and thieves will try to steal your money or kill you. (TeleNex Students)

Quite apart from whether annoy is a strong enough verb to use in this context, it is likely that the student is confusing this verb with a "like type". Here are some possible rewordings (note the use of passive voice in the first rewording):

You may be annoyed when you go shopping because the robbers, murderers and thieves will try to steal your money or kill you.

You may hate it when you go shopping because the robbers, murderers and thieves will try to steal your money or kill you.

For information about one of the problems that students have with the use of passive voice with emotion verbs, see 06studpr.gif (552 bytes) Using passive voice: Students’ problems (p 5).

For one of the teaching implications related to the order of participants, see 07tim.gif (542 bytes) Representing thinking, perceiving, liking and desiring: Teaching implications (p 6).

06studpr.gif (552 bytes) Introduction
06studpr.gif (552 bytes) Patterns associated with report structures
06studpr.gif (552 bytes) Problems associated with the that clause
06studpr.gif (552 bytes) Choosing between to-infinitive and the -ing form
06studpr.gif (552 bytes) Inappropriate use of distancing devices
square.gif (58 bytes) Problems with the order of participants
06studpr.gif (552 bytes) Metaphorical meanings
06studpr.gif (552 bytes) Problems with wish and hope