Finding out about Ocean Park: Pop-up notes

All the pop-up screens from this PrimeTeach file have been copied here so that you can print them out easily. 

Overview

Note:

This package of materials was developed in collaboration with the following teachers:

Wendy Arnold, Lau Chi Wa Irene, Hui Sze Lai Celia, Chan Kit Wah Cathy.

The materials were developed through a series of TeleNex workshops and have been piloted in Hong Kong primary classrooms.

Example:
cable car dolphin exciting
crazy ship panda dangerous
ferris wheel sea lion friendly
roller coaster shark funny

Glossary: Scanning is a way of reading quickly to find specific information within a text. It is not necessary to read and understand every word. In everyday life we might scan to find a name and number in a telephone directory for example. As English teachers we often scan the contents pages of text books to find activities that focus on a particular area of vocabulary or grammar that we need to teach.

Theory:

Students need to be able to distinguish between essential key words which carry meanings, and words which can be ignored for note-making purposes. Activities are provided in which students expand and contract sentences to help raise their awareness of the kinds of word classes that carry information essential for making notes. In the activities in this package, verbs, adjectives and adverb groups carry meanings. Students need to be able to spot the key words and transfer them from sentences for the purpose of making notes. (Nouns are already provided in the note making worksheets).

Theory: The process of reviewing and making changes to a piece of writing is known as editing. In the editing process, writers review and change content before proofreading it to check for accuracy of grammar, punctuation and spelling.

Students need activities to help them develop their editing skills if they are to become independent and effective editors of their own work. The editing activity in this package encourages students to focus on the accuracy of the information about the attractions at Ocean Park.

Example:
dolphin
panda
sea lion
shark

Example:
cable car
crazy ship
ferris wheel
roller coaster

Example:
It goes up and down.
It goes round and round.
It goes backwards and forwards.
It goes high and low.

Example:
It twists and turns.
It loops.
It swings.
It rises and falls.

Example:
They can jump very high. 
They can clap and walk.
They can kill and swim.
They can dive.
They can do tricks.

Example:
The dolphins are intelligent.
The sharks are dangerous.
The sea lions are funny.
The pandas are cute and friendly.
The roller coaster is exciting.

Materials

Note:

It is a good idea to enlarge the Animals, Rides and Information sheet worksheets to A3 size on the photocopier because students will be working in pairs or groups and will therefore need a large copy between them.

Note:

If students use the highlighted version, they are not required to find the information. Instead, they simply transfer the highlighted information to the correct boxes in the Rides and Animals worksheets.

It is a good idea to enlarge this worksheet to A3 size on the photocopier because students will be working in pairs or groups and will therefore need one large copy between them.

Note:

The reading race instructions are suitable for students who are already familiar with terms such as adverb, adjective and verb.

Steps

1. Theory: The purpose of this activity is to arouse students' interest and encourage communication. Short answers are acceptable and it is not appropriate to insist on grammatical accuracy at this stage. Avoid correcting students while they are speaking because it may discourage them from contributing to the discussion. It is a good idea to repeat what individuals say so that the whole class can hear individual contributions. When repeating, you can model the students ideas in grammatically correct sentences without directly drawing attention to the errors they made. If students express their ideas in Cantonese, model them in English for the whole class.

2.  Example:
cable car panda
crazy ship roller coaster
dolphin sea lion
ferris wheel shark

2.  Theory: It is important to give students a clear model of the target language. They need to be able to hear the vocabulary with correct syllable stress and clear pronunciation before they go on to practise saying it.

4.  Key:

5.  Example:
can clap can swim friendly
can dive  can walk funny
can jump dangerous rises and falls
can kill exciting backwards and forwards

5.  Example:
sharks - can dive - can swim - can kill - dangerous

6.  Theory:

Monitoring helps the teacher to identify problems that need to be dealt with on an individual basis. It also enables the teacher to make a note of problems that are common to many students. These problems can then be focused on during whole-class feedback.

7. Key: Here are some possible answers:

sharks - can dive - can swim - can kill - dangerous
sea lions - can clap - can swim - can walk 
dolphins - can dive - can swim - can jump - friendly 
pandas - friendly
roller coaster - exciting
crazy ship - backwards and forwards - exciting
cable car - rises and falls
ferris wheel - exciting

8. Example:
sharks They can swim.
They can dive.
They can kill.

They are dangerous.
sealions They can clap.
They can swim.
They can walk.

They are funny.
dolphins They can dive.
They can swim.
They can jump.

pandas They are friendly.

roller coaster It is exciting.

crazy ship It is exciting.

It goes backwards and forwards.
cable car It rises and falls.

ferris wheel It is exciting.

8. Note: It is important to present vocabulary and grammar in an organised way on the board so that students can see how it is used in context. Grammatical features, such as verbs, adjectives and adverb groups, can be highlighted to help students to become aware of the grammatical patterns that occur in English. 

It is not always necessary to go into grammatical explanations with KS2 students. If students are encouraged to notice patterns and work things out for themselves they can start to form their own rules and this can help make the target language more meaningful and memorable.

8. Theory: Getting willing students to write on the board has a number of benefits for language learners:

It enables students to be actively involved in the presentation and feedback of the target language.
It can give students a sense of responsibility.
It can provide students with an opportunity to demonstrate what they already know and thereby increase their confidence in using English.
It can add variety and provide a change of pace in the lesson.
It allows the teacher to identify problems which can then be dealt with before students move onto the next activity.

9. Example:
They can kill
They are dangerous

Attraction What can they do? What are they like? What can you see/do/visit?

kill

dangerous

visit shark aquarium
see 70 sharks
walk through underwater tunnel


9. Theory: Students need to be able to distinguish between essential key words which carry meanings, and words which can be ignored for note-making purposes. Activities are provided in which students expand and contract sentences to help raise their awareness of the kinds of word classes that carry information essential for making notes. In the activities in this package, verbs, adjectives and adverb groups carry meanings. Students need to be able to spot the key words and transfer them from sentences for the purpose of making notes. (Nouns are already provided in the note making worksheets).

11. Theory: When we scan, we read quickly to find specific information within a text. We already have an idea of the kind of information we are looking for so it is not necessary to read and understand every word.

11. Note: Steps 8 -10 contain highly structured activities which prepare students for the reading text. The reading text contains some unfamiliar and difficult vocabulary, however students do not need to be able to understand everything in the text. The preparatory activities ensure that students have a purpose for reading and can tackle difficult texts and obtain the information they are looking for.

12. Key: Animals
Attractions What can they do? What are they like? What can you see/do/visit?
sharks kill dangerous
visit shark aquarium
see 70 sharks
walk through underwater tunnel
dolphins jump
dive
somersault
intelligent
visit Dolphin University
learn about caring for marine animals
sealions do tricks
clap
walk
adorable
amusing
funny
visit Ocean Theatre
pandas   14 years old
95kg
friendly
learn about an endangered animal
learn how to save pandas from extinction

Rides

Attractions What does it do? What is it like? What can you do?
roller coaster twists
turns
loops
very exciting
enjoy Hong Kong's longest roller coaster
crazy swing goes backwards and forwards
swings high and low
exciting
a huge swing
scream your head off
cable car rises and falls fascinating
wonderful
breathtaking
see all of Ocean Park
see the South China Sea
ferris wheel goes round and round relaxing
fun
27 metres tall
ride on the ferris wheel with all of the family

 

12. Adaptation: Steps 8-10 contain highly structured activities that prepare students for the reading activity and ensure that students bring knowledge to the semi-authentic text in the Information sheet. However, depending on the ability and confidence of your class you could adapt Steps 8-12 in the following ways: 

For less confident students, or if you feel that your students need more guidance, work through Steps 8-10 as indicated, in Step 11 give them the worksheet entitled Information sheet (highlighted) which has the key information highlighted in bold. Ask them to put the bolded information into the correct boxes in the Animals and Rides worksheets.
For more confident students who are already familiar with the grammatical focus of this package, or for students who do not require such highly structured activities and are confident meeting unfamiliar vocabulary, you can miss out Steps 8-10. Ask students to use their own ideas along with the information sheet in order to complete the tables in the Rides and Animals worksheets.
This adaptation is for more confident students who are already familiar with terms such as adverb, adjective and verb.

If your students are already familiar with the labels used for word classes (ie verbs, adverbs, adjectives) you can give them the Reading race instructions in order to find information in the Information sheet. They can use the information obtained through the reading race in order to complete the Rides and Animals worksheets. 

How to carry out the Reading race:

1. Put students into groups of four. 
2. Explain that you have a set of instructions for each group on pieces of paper on your desk. 
3. Appoint a team leader in each group who must come to your desk and ask for an instruction which they have to take back to their group and read out to the group. 
4. The other students in the group should scan the Information sheet, find the answer and write it in note-form in the table on the Rides or Animals worksheet. 
5. The team leader then returns to the teachers desk, tells her/him the answer and collects the next instruction.
6. Explain that the race continues until one group has found all the information. 
7.  The teacher then feeds back the answers with the whole class.

Note:

The reading race can give students the opportunity to practise reading, speaking, listening and writing skills through an enjoyable activity. However, good organisation and classroom management skills are important in order to maximise purposeful talk and minimise unnecessary noise. 

Make sure that every group is clear about individual responsibilities and that individuals are given a responsibility that they are capable of carrying out confidently. You will need to ensure that each group has someone who is responsible for the following: collecting the instruction and reading it out; looking for the answer in the text; writing the answer; returning to the teachers' desk to say the answer and collect the next instruction.

13. Theory: The process of reviewing and making changes to a piece of writing is known as editing. In the editing process, writers review and change content before proofreading it to check for accuracy of grammar, punctuation and spelling.

Students need activities to help them develop their editing skills if they are to become independent and effective editors of their own work. The editing activity in this package encourages students to focus on the accuracy of the information about the attractions at Ocean Park.

14. Theory: There are a number of reasons for getting students to check their ideas/answers with a partner in this activity:

It gives students the opportunity to recycle the vocabulary and grammar they have learned and use it for a communicative purpose.
It is a good way of getting students to develop and use the communicative functions that are associated with the targets in the Interpersonal Dimension of TOC.
It encourages students to develop and use the language they need to participate in collaborative learning.

14. Example: In order to compare answers/ideas, students need to be able to ask questions and seek agreement. It is a good idea to build up a display of such language in the classroom in order to encourage students to use it during group and pair work.



16. Key: The incorrect information is highlighted in italics:

Ocean Park is fun for kids!

You can visit the aquarium and you can swim with sharks. The dolphins can walk and clap. You can watch the dolphins and the sea lions at the Ocean Theatre. The sea lions are dangerous and they can do tricks. The crazy ship is a big slide. It goes backwards and forwards. It is very exciting. The cable car is relaxing and it goes round and round. The views from the cable car are wonderful. The ferris wheel twists and turns and the roller coaster is relaxing

The corrections are in bold:

Ocean Park is fun for kids!

You can visit the aquarium and you can look at the sharks. The dolphins can jump, swim and dive. You can watch the dolphins and the sea lions at the Ocean Theatre. The sea lions are funny/amusing and they can do tricks. The crazy ship is a big swing. It goes backwards and forwards. It is very exciting. The cable car is relaxing and it goes up and down. The views from the cable car are wonderful. The ferris wheel goes round and round and the roller coaster is exciting/scary/frightening.

Grammar notes

For more information on using adverb groups, look at the following in PrimeGram:

  Grammar: Groups & phrases: Adverb groups: Overview

For more information on using verbs, look at the following in PrimeGram:

  Grammar: Word classes: Verbs: Overview

For more information on using modals, look at the following in PrimeGram:

  Grammar: Groups & phrases: Verb group: Adjusting interactions: modality: Overview

For more information on using adjectives, look at the following in PrimeGram:

  Grammar: Word classes: Adjectives: Overview