Representing actions with nouns

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Expressing ideas in an appropriately technical manner

Nominalisation is more commonly used in technical writing  (compared with casual conversation ), especially scientific and bureaucratic domains, where writers are concerned with categorising, labelling, and describing the phenomena associated with their field. In order for writers to discuss these phenomena, it is often necessary for them to treat processes as if they were things, through nominalisation:

Sewage treatment is something most of us never think about, yet it is a relatively straightforward process which contributes immeasurably to the comfort of modern urban life. Sewage treatment involves a simple process of screening the effluent, followed by a period of settlement and separation, after which the water is ready for purification and the remaining sludge for disposal.

Each of the highlighted words is a nominalisation of a lengthy and quite complex process, condensed here into an abstract noun. This use of nominalisation adds to the sense of objectivity and formality of the text .

One negative side-effect of this formality is that it provides an opportunity for the writer to "show off". This is partly because the ability to use nominalisation is a symbol of literacy and therefore, an indication that an individual has received an education. In most societies, an educated person has higher social status and even power, and so excessive use of nominalisation is used by some people, especially bureaucrats, as a sort of status symbol.

Unfortunately, documents written in this way are not always very clear except to people immediately involved, and familiar with all of the details, eg in an inter-department memo you might find the following piling-up of nominalisations:


    Department of Obfuscation and Prevarication

    Memorandum

      To: All members of the preliminary working group

      Re: Guidelines pertaining to formatting of the working group's referrals to
documentation on allocation of working schedules

 

04conten.gif (549 bytes) Introduction
04conten.gif (549 bytes) Expressing ideas concisely
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04conten.gif (549 bytes) Manipulating the elements in a text
04conten.gif (549 bytes) Expressing ideas coherently
04conten.gif (549 bytes) Neutral summarising nouns
04conten.gif (549 bytes) Summarising nouns used to give a negative evaluation
04conten.gif (549 bytes) Summarising nouns used to give a positive evaluation
04conten.gif (549 bytes) Summarising nouns referring to actions and events